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Cyber Beats

Cyber beats drive us freaks,
UV lights, fishnet tights,
Fairy wings, tribal rings,
Metal spikes, all your might,
Rainbow dreads, we’re on meds,
Corsets tight; we’re alright,
Flowing dress, gothic mess,
Ribbons, lace, pierced face,
Zombie bride show your pride,
Long haired men gorgeous when,
Platform boots, three piece suit,
Top hat too, join the crew,
We’re so hot, you’re so not,
Come on babe; we say rave,
Cyber beats drive us freaks,
Metal blasts for outcasts,
Join us babe; we say rave,
Join our clique;
We’re the freaks.
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:D

I wrote this after a day out in good ol' Camden town. I love it there, there are so many interesting people and things to see and eveeeerybody is really, really lovely! :heart:
I admit, CYBERDAWGGG has a lot to answer for this poem because of its awesomeness.

Fact: during this trip to Camden I bought my fluffy boot covers :meow:

Check out the "Cyber Freaks" here: [link]


Cyber Love,
MISTRESS
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:icong00dby3-cru3l-w0rld:
Cooooooooooooolio.... Love it...
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*laurie---x Jun 14, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
:D Thanks!
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!LabyrinthineMind Jun 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
AWESOME!
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:iconamerican-israeli:
I Love how you make your poetry rhyme and flow.You are so multitalented that a day doesn't go by that you don't amaze me by your talent :)
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*laurie---x Feb 27, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks!
I consider this to be my best poem to date so I'm glad you like it :D
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:iconamerican-israeli:
I don't just like it, I Love it :D Among everything else you do, you're really an amazing writer and poet :D :hug:
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:iconlunacy-enfolds:
The flow to this is great! The structure with your word choice was sick. Sauce =) lol
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*laurie---x Dec 27, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
:D Thanks!
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:iconbluesilveruu:
Nice rythem! "Let the beat rock!" (Black Eyed Peas)
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*laurie---x Nov 17, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Haha =p

Thanks! xx
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