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Cyber Beats

Cyber beats drive us freaks,
UV lights, fishnet tights,
Fairy wings, tribal rings,
Metal spikes, all your might,
Rainbow dreads, we’re on meds,
Corsets tight; we’re alright,
Flowing dress, gothic mess,
Ribbons, lace, pierced face,
Zombie bride show your pride,
Long haired men gorgeous when,
Platform boots, three piece suit,
Top hat too, join the crew,
We’re so hot, you’re so not,
Come on babe; we say rave,
Cyber beats drive us freaks,
Metal blasts for outcasts,
Join us babe; we say rave,
Join our clique;
We’re the freaks.
Hey I work at Cyberdog now...!

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Laurie
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:icong00dby3-cru3l-w0rld:
Cooooooooooooolio.... Love it...
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laurie---x Jun 14, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D Thanks!
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LabyrinthineMind Jun 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
AWESOME!
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American-Israeli Feb 27, 2010
I Love how you make your poetry rhyme and flow.You are so multitalented that a day doesn't go by that you don't amaze me by your talent :)
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laurie---x Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks!
I consider this to be my best poem to date so I'm glad you like it :D
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:iconamerican-israeli:
American-Israeli Feb 27, 2010
I don't just like it, I Love it :D Among everything else you do, you're really an amazing writer and poet :D :hug:
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Lunacy-Enfolds Dec 23, 2009   Writer
The flow to this is great! The structure with your word choice was sick. Sauce =) lol
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laurie---x Dec 27, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D Thanks!
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BlueSilverUU Aug 29, 2009
Nice rythem! "Let the beat rock!" (Black Eyed Peas)
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laurie---x Nov 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha =p

Thanks! xx
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